Beta Reader Edits

After privately printing 20 copies and soliciting feedback from around 15 Beta readers, Beta V3 is ready for my professional editor to begin her work on 3/7/3026.

Most of the feedback has been along the lines of "not my usual genre but really good.", "I'm not too technical but the read, didnt make me feel stupid.", "Loved the depth of your characters", "wow, didnt see that coming", "will there be a Book Two?".

Some feedaback led to the addition of 33 pages for V3. Most of those pages centered around developing the characters more so the reader is introduced to them with more background and depth. Also, one of the main plot themes, comes at the reader too fast, so I slowed down the opening chapter.

I am pleased that none of my readers said this sucks. I am super excited for my editor to begin, so I can work with her and really polish this up!